Monday, May 27, 2013

600 Plus

The next excerpt from Earthen Vessels appears below, in honor of my 600th view. Enjoy pages 15 and 16. As always, comments are more than welcome.

It had been a chilly fifteen degrees the morning Maggie bundled up and headed for Denver International. When she reached Dallas that afternoon, the temperature there was close to fifty. She mailed her coat back home the following morning from the Mexico City airport, where the temperature was almost eighty. The temperature here in Miraflores was higher yet, with the humidity thickening every minute.
Look,” she sighed, rubbing her eyes. “It’s just that…just that it’s already hot as hell out, and I’ve had about … about six hours sleep in the last thirty-six. All I want…I just...”
Marc was giving her a quizzical look, which she, in response, returned. She realized then that he was looking over her shoulder, out the window. Turning her gaze in the same direction, Maggie saw that a jeep had pulled up alongside Marc’s plane, and a man in a striped shirt was climbing out of the driver’s seat. Marc’s eyes were fixed on the striped shirt as he spoke.
Wait here,” he ordered, before he strode out to the plane. Maggie immediately began wracking her brain: how could she make Marc change his mind and fly her to the research station? She saw the two men speaking for a moment before Marc pointed her way. She heard them start to shout at each other, but couldn’t make out what they were saying. Then her head snapped toward the ominous thud of Hector locking up the hatch on his own plane. Once he took off, Maggie knew she really would be stranded out here.
Panicking, Maggie burst out the door in Marc’s direction. “I can pay cash,” she blurted out before she realized how desperate she sounded. Striped shirt gave her an angry glare and so did Marc. He took her elbow roughly and spun her back the way she’d come.
I told you to wait inside.” He flung open the door and nearly flung Maggie through it. She hardly noticed.
And I’m telling you. I’ve got the money right here.” And then, right in front of him, she bent over to rifle through her bag on the floor. Marc had to look away to keep his mind on the business at hand. She straightened up and turned to show him a sheaf of bills pulled from the bag.
A protective impulse kicked in for Marc, an instinct he didn’t think he had. He folded his hand over hers, over the bills, and was about to tell the stupid chick to put away her money. When his palm came in contact with the cash, though, the impulse passed. The words that came out of his mouth then were, “Payment up front or no deal.” 
 
Leaving Maggie with strict instructions to stay inside the office, Marc went back to exchange a few parting words with Mr. Striped Shirt. (For security reasons, Marc’s associates made a point of not knowing one another’s names.)
Just so that nothing was lost in translation and just for emphasis, Marc planted both hands possessively on the fuselage of the twin engine as he spoke. “See, you don’t own this plane-“
You don’t own this plane,” Striped Shirt interjected, his face like a stone.
Okay, okay. Technically, legally, I don’t,” Marc conceded. “But I was the one who took the initiative to steal it from the technical, legal owner. So I decide for myself if I have time to take on a passenger before I make your deliveries, and I-”
They’re your deliveries.” The expression was even more granite than before. “I done my part and I won’t take the heat for you after you fuck this up.” Without another word, the striped shirt then turned to move his jeep clear of the plane’s take-off path, another hint that Marc had better get a move on.
Marc was determined to get in the last word, but was left with nothing to say. “You don’t own the plane,” he shouted after the driver. “And you don’t own me!”

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